In this grand pattern of things you'll get  a B+ with regard to hard work. Where exactly you actually lost me personally ended up being in all the specifics. You know,  people say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, let me inform you what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is certainly very persuasive which is possibly the reason why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can notice the jumps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily convinced of how you seem to unite your details which produce the actual conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point but wish in the near future you connect the dots better.